
my favourite food in the whole wide world is indian food in singapore.i love the biriyani! when you start to eat it you can never stop.it is that tasty, mouth watering and delicious.it can be sometimes spicy or sometimes not.i like because it always fills my huge tummy.

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Do you remember your P.C.PIGS (proofreading) from last term? Your CAPS are missing and I see some spelling errors. Also, please leave a space after your fullstops before you begin another sentence - just obsereve how I do it in my writing.
ReplyDeleteJust a question: How can something be "sometimes spicy or sometimes not". Would you like to explain that further?